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Finishing and editing your diary entry


Good morning all!


Today, you will complete and then edit your diary entry.

Try and use a red pen (or any other different coloured pen or pencil) to edit your work so that you can see where you can improve your sentences.


Check that you have:

  • Capital letters and full stops as well as other punctuation.
  • A wide variety of conjunctions (because, so, and, but)
  • Included subject specific vocabulary (words associated with Roman times)
  • Used the features check list (link below) to edit your work then add in anything you may have missed.