Finishing and editing your diary entry
Good morning all!
Today, you will complete and then edit your diary entry.
Try and use a red pen (or any other different coloured pen or pencil) to edit your work so that you can see where you can improve your sentences.
Check that you have:
- Capital letters and full stops as well as other punctuation.
- A wide variety of conjunctions (because, so, and, but)
- Included subject specific vocabulary (words associated with Roman times)
- Used the features check list (link below) to edit your work then add in anything you may have missed.