LO: To know how to organise ideas around a theme.
First main paragraph
Your first main paragraph should begin with a subheading which summarises for the reader what the paragraph will be about or answer (if you have used a rhetorical question). Begin with a topic sentence that details what the paragraph will be about. Include details about the topic, linking ideas with phrases and adverbials. Don’t forget to refer to the success criteria for guidance of what else you need to include.
Please edit your writing when you have finished.
A model example has been uploaded to support you.